100wc week 33

Dear fatimata, I feel sorry for you and your family,I wonder if i could do something to help you and your friends if you have to mine gold every day,But you at least get food. How tiring is mining for gold,at where I live people are really lucky sometimes I feel bad for even eating and don’t really appreciate food that much.if you had to mine gold that much just for a bit of food,is something I could never imagine me doing that but still I hope they give you enough food for your family.Wish you luck, And best of hope.kahlil

2 thoughts on “100wc week 33

  1. Hi Kahlil, Fatimata’s story has obviously really had an impact on you. I like how you ask a question but don’t forget to include the question mark at the end. Please don’t feel guilty about eating but you can thank the adults who look after you for your food. I like how you finish your letter with ‘best of hope’ as this is a really nice thing to end with. Well done!

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